Assignment title: Information
EEvaluation Results
Author: Brian Voorhees
Date Evaluated: 09/09/2016 10:33:55 AM (MDT)
DRF template: Technological Globalization (GR, MBT20512)
Program: Technological Globalization (GR, MBT20512)
Evaluation Method: Using Rubric
Evaluation Summary for Technological Globalization: MBT Task 3
Final Score: Does not Meet
Overall comments: 9/9/16 Please confer with a course mentor before working further on this
assessment. A discussion of VoIP, a chat client, and video conferencing, which
would reduce costs, allow information sharing, and permit users to see one
another, as well as display information, is nicely introduced. The submission engine
plan, network map, languages, concerns about bias, issues affecting users,
accessibility, effective communication, and technology trends aspects are
insufficiently addressed.
Detailed Results (Rubric used: MBT Task 3)
Articulation of Response (clarity, organization, mechanics)
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate provides
unsatisfactory
articulation of
response.
The candidate provides
weak articulation of
response.
The candidate provides
limited articulation of
response.
The candidate provides
adequate articulation of
response.
The candidate provides
substantial articulation
of response.
Criterion Score: 3.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The submission effectively uses a table of content, headings, and paragraphs to
organize the writing.
A. Submission Engine Plan
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a submission
engine plan that
addresses the concerns
in the scenario.
The candidate provides
a submission engine
plan, with no detail,
that addresses the
concerns in the
scenario.
The candidate provides
a submission engine
plan, with limited detail,
that addresses the
concerns in the
scenario.
The candidate provides
a submission engine
plan, with adequate
detail, that addresses
the concerns in the
scenario.
The candidate provides
a submission engine
plan, with substantial
detail, that addresses
the concerns in the
scenario.
Criterion Score: 1.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The wellorganized essay provides a submission engine plan that uses distributed
cloud computing, a firewall, and a web interface. Specific details for the submission engine plan that address the concerns
in the scenario are not clearly evident. Please provide a detailed submission engine plan that clearly and adequately
addresses each of the concerns from the scenario, including accept data from multiple sources (e.g., Internet, Twitter),
organize data, make data presentable for the editing team, allow submissions to be highlighted from various parts of the
world, store the data securely, make it easy for the company to back up and restore data, and provide sufficient
bandwidth for people to submit ideas at all times.
Printed on: 09/09/2016 01:36:43 PM (EST)A1. Network Map
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a network map
that includes the given
points.
The candidate provides
a network map, with no
detail, that includes the
given points.
The candidate provides
a network map, with
limited detail, that
includes the given
points.
The candidate provides
a network map, with
adequate detail, that
includes the given
points.
The candidate provides
a network map, with
substantial detail, that
includes the given
points.
Criterion Score: 1.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The network map thoughtfully depicts an unspecified host, third city, second city,
an external router, firewall, switch, and internal data server. The network map is lacking details in regard to the given
points. Please provide a detailed network map that clearly and specifically addresses where the submission engine will
reside, who will host and support the submission engine, and how the submission engine and its data will be protected.
A2. Languages
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a logical
explanation of how the
submission engine plan
will handle submissions
in other languages,
including Portuguese
and Mandarin.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with no detail, of how
the submission engine
plan will handle
submissions in other
languages, including
Portuguese and
Mandarin.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with limited detail, of
how the submission
engine plan will handle
submissions in other
languages, including
Portuguese and
Mandarin.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with adequate detail, of
how the submission
engine plan will handle
submissions in other
languages, including
Portuguese and
Mandarin.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with substantial detail,
of how the submission
engine plan will handle
submissions in other
languages, including
Portuguese and
Mandarin.
Criterion Score: 1.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The essay clearly states the submission engine plan will use Google's Translator
API to allow the staff to view the company's website in their own languages. It is unclear how the submission engine
plan will handle submissions in other languages, including Portuguese and Mandarin.
A3. Concerns About Bias
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a logical
explanation of how the
candidate will use
technologies to help
alleviate the concerns
that the content is
biased toward
technology
professionals and
educators in the United
States.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with no detail, of how
the candidate will use
technologies to help
alleviate the concerns
that the content is
biased toward
technology
professionals and
educators in the United
States.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with limited detail, of
how the candidate will
use technologies to
help alleviate the
concerns that the
content is biased
toward technology
professionals and
educators in the United
States.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with adequate detail, of
how the candidate will
use technologies to
help alleviate the
concerns that the
content is biased
toward technology
professionals and
educators in the United
States.
The candidate provides
a logical explanation,
with substantial detail,
of how the candidate
will use technologies to
help alleviate the
concerns that the
content is biased toward
technology
professionals and
educators in the United
States.
Criterion Score: 0.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The essay discusses reducing latency and employing VoIP to allow team members
to coordinate their efforts. It is unclear how technologies will be used to help alleviate concerns that the content is biased
toward technology professionals and educators in the United States.
A4. Issues Affecting Users
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a logical
discussion of which
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with no detail, of which
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with limited detail, of
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with adequate detail, of
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with substantial detail,
Printed on: 09/09/2016 01:36:43 PM (EST)technologies can help
address the bandwidth
and server lag time
issues affecting users in
the scenario.
technologies can help
address the bandwidth
and server lag time
issues affecting users in
the scenario.
which technologies can
help address the
bandwidth and server
lag time issues
affecting users in the
scenario.
which technologies can
help address the
bandwidth and server
lag time issues
affecting users in the
scenario.
of which technologies
can help address the
bandwidth and server
lag time issues
affecting users in the
scenario.
Criterion Score: 1.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 A discussion of purchasing virtual bandwidth from the cloud services provider to
help address bandwidth issues is nicely introduced; however, the discussion of the technologies the cloud services
provider would use to help address bandwidth and server lag time issues is unclear. The discussion needs to address
technologies that would help address the bandwidth and server lag time issues affecting the users specified in the
scenario and align with the submission engine plan.
A5. Accessibility
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a logical
discussion of how the
candidate will use
technologies to
organize information to
make it more
accessible for users and
employees.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with no detail, of how
the candidate will use
technologies to
organize information to
make it more
accessible for users and
employees.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with limited detail, of
how the candidate will
use technologies to
organize information to
make it more
accessible for users and
employees.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with adequate detail, of
how the candidate will
use technologies to
organize information to
make it more
accessible for users and
employees.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with substantial detail,
of how the candidate
will use technologies to
organize information to
make it more
accessible for users and
employees.
Criterion Score: 0.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The submission clearly discusses mechanisms for login and administration of server
access, as well as states the server will be organized according to region with file access managed by an administrator. It
is unclear how the CIO will use technologies to organize information to make it more accessible for users and employees.
B. Effective Communication
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a logical
discussion of how
partners based in Brazil
and Taiwan will use key
technologies to
communicate effectively
with each other and with
the corporate office in
Seattle.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with no detail, of how
partners based in Brazil
and Taiwan will use key
technologies to
communicate effectively
with each other and with
the corporate office in
Seattle.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with limited detail, of
how partners based in
Brazil and Taiwan will
use key technologies to
communicate effectively
with each other and with
the corporate office in
Seattle.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with adequate detail, of
how partners based in
Brazil and Taiwan will
use key technologies to
communicate effectively
with each other and with
the corporate office in
Seattle.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with substantial detail,
of how partners based
in Brazil and Taiwan will
use key technologies to
communicate effectively
with each other and with
the corporate office in
Seattle.
Criterion Score: 2.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 A discussion of VoIP, a chat client, and video conferencing, which would reduce
costs, allow information sharing, and permit users to see one another, as well as display information, is nicely introduced.
The discussion of how the partners based in Brazil and Taiwan will use VoIP, an integrated chat client, video conferencing,
or other key technologies to communicate effectively with each other and with the corporate office in Seattle is
insufficiently detailed.
C. Technology Trends
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
The candidate does not
provide a logical
discussion of which
technology trends will
support the company's
mission.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with no detail, of which
technology trends will
support the company's
mission.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with limited detail, of
which technology trends
will support the
company's mission.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with adequate detail, of
which technology trends
will support the
company's mission.
The candidate provides
a logical discussion,
with substantial detail,
of which technology
trends will support the
company's mission.
Printed on: 09/09/2016 01:36:43 PM (EST)Criterion Score: 1.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The submission discusses virtualization and document sharing technology trends.
The discussion of the virtualization and document sharing trends' ability to support the company's mission is unclear.
Please clarify the discussion of the virtualization, document sharing, or other technology trends that will support the
company's mission "to provide IT instructors worldwide with direct input from industry experts and subject matter experts
concerning IT standards and best practices."
D. Sources
(0) Unsatisfactory (1) Does Not Meet
Standard
(2) Minimally
Competent
(3) Competent (4) Highly
Competent
When the candidate
uses sources, the
candidate does not
provide intext citations
and references.
When the candidate
uses sources, the
candidate provides only
some intext citations
and references.
When the candidate
uses sources, the
candidate provides
appropriate intext
citations and references
with major deviations
from APA style.
When the candidate
uses sources, the
candidate provides
appropriate intext
citations and references
with minor deviations
from APA style.
When the candidate
uses sources, the
candidate provides
appropriate intext
citations and references
with no readily
detectable deviations
from APA style, OR the
candidate does not use
sources.
Criterion Score: 4.00
Comments on this criterion: 9/9/16 The eight sources that were quoted or paraphrased were properly acknowledged.
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