These episodes were not upto mark and I have been asked to completely change them. The following is the COMMENT given by the assessor: THE TWO Career Episodes you have presented provides insufficient detail of the engineering work undertaken by you - it is not sufficient to merely state your duties or working procedures with only general description. Not only 'what you did', but instead, 'HOW YOU DID IT' should be presented in 'Personal Engineering Activities' part. Each career episode should emphasise any ENGINEERING PROBLEMS identified and any particular PROBLEM SOLVING TECHNIQUES used by you. Therefore, please refer to MSA Booklet and rewrite this career episode emphasising your professional engineering competencies in more detail. In addition, Please UPDATE accordingly the Summary Statement. We have uploaded CE 2 and CE 3 that need to be changed. We have also added CE 1 which was written by me and was accepted by assessor. Please do have a look at it and work accordingly. We would hope that everything goes as planned this time and that my money and time would not be wasted. Please let me know of desired cost.