Assignment title: Management


Part 1a – Draft Narrative Overview and Report Structure Part 1b – Draft Conceptual Model Part 1c – Final Design Specification Report there are 3 parts of this assignmentPart 1 and 2 I have already doneBut i have got very less marks in thatPart 3 is the final submission Please start with My assignment. The assignment has 3 parts out of which I have already submitted first 2 parts. I Have god very low ( FAILED) marks in part A & B. to pass this subject I need High Distinction in PART-C. Please do your best to help me out. I am attaching the work what I had done and I'll also give you the comments which my tutor gave. Please start with this assignment ASAP FIT5130_Assignment.1(a)_v1.0_Yugal_26167271.doc COMMENTS BY THE TUTOR PART-A (GRADE 44/100) - FAIL It seems that the report you provided does not follow the guidelines for the introductory narrative. The quality of expression is good, but the presentation is lacking. Table of contents is missing, there are spelling mistakes, showing a lack of proof-reading. PART-B ( GRADE - 18/100) - FAIL The introduction is too short to be an introductory narrative, it does not cover the requirements, nor does it discuss the business problems and background adequately.For your next submission, try to include a full narrative. Please Use the crows foot notation ( figure 1) ERD is too brief, the attributes are not appropriate and a lot of aspects of the case are not captured UML class diagram missing ( No need of DFD- Figure 2) Figure-3 Class diagram is very brief. It does not cover even the basic requorements. The attributes are inappropiate and it does not comply to the notational conventions. The generelization is used incorrectly between CMF and Word as well as on the bottom of the diagram. Figure-4 It needs more details to fully satisfy the requirements. CMF is not an appropriate actor Figure-5 Incomplete and inappropriate Activity Diagram. The use case utilized is not correct. Figure-6 The SSD should show only the the system and actors involved. Also it should be consistent with the activity Diagram I am attaching the class notes so you can Get an IDEA how we are supposed to make the diagrams SAD-6.pdf Class Notes SAD-7.pdf SAD-8.pdf Additional information for Order : MAH201014_19025_40643 Order Emails Management Order Id : MAH201014_19025_40643 Details : By what time are you gonna Give me the assignment... You asked for extension by 1 day and you guys promised you'll get the assignment done by 21-Oct. Its 22-oct today and I am waiting since morning. Please send the compplete assignment ASAP Regards Enjoy!The Order Emails Management Team