Assignment title: Information
HOW TO WRITE THE
ESSAY
Some helpful advice on doing the essayContents
Assessment Criteria ................................................................................................................................3
How to submit.........................................................................................................................................3
How to write the assignment..................................................................................................................4
In the Introduction..............................................................................................................................4
Writing the Middle Sections ...............................................................................................................4
Conclusion...........................................................................................................................................5
Referencing .........................................................................................................................................5
Plagiarism............................................................................................................................................6Assessment Criteria
Writing Style: Well-structured sentences, i.e. clearly expressed, easy to
understand, not too long. Paragraphs are coherent and refer to an identifiable
topic. Out of 10.
Evidence of Research: Reputable sources used (e.g. published books,
educational or government websites). Key facts and evidence referenced in the
text. Out of 10.
Content: Important aspects of the essay topic successfully covered. Not too
much irrelevant material unconnected to the main argument. All relevant
course material is referenced. Out of 10.
Coherence of Argument: Argument clearly stated, sections logically ordered and
linked, counter arguments discussed, sensible conclusions drawn. Out of 12.
Correct APA Style: Bibliography correctly formatted, citations used
appropriately and correctly formatted (zero if APA style not used). Out of 8.
Overall Impression: How did it all fit together? Depth of thought, arriving at a
satisfying understanding of the issues, care taken over details. Out of 10.
How to submit
Use Turnitin submission link in L@G (further down the same page that you obtained
this document) no later than midnight on Friday of Week 10.
Late penalties apply (10% of total mark for each day late). The weekend counts as one
day. So, if you submit on the Monday of the week following the Friday due date, 20%
will be deducted from the mark you would have received had the assignment been
handed in on time. Submit it five days late, and 50% is deducted.How to write the assignment
In the Introduction
The first sentence of an introduction needs to capture the reader’s interest and make a
general assertion about the topic. For instance, you could say “The pace of
technological change has been proceeding exponentially for the past 50 years.”
You then need to briefly justify your assertion, and give the reader a flavour of the
topic.
The main purpose of the introduction is to capture the reader’s interest and give a
general background to the rest of the essay. One approach could be to describe the
historical background of technology development since the Second World War.
Then, the introduction needs to summarise the rest of the essay. The idea is for the
reader to get an overall idea of the content of the full essay, so that he or she can
decide whether it is worth reading further. Therefore, the introduction should end with
a guide to the rest of the document. For example, you could say: “In the next section
we introduce …”
Writing the Middle Sections
The middle sections, or body of the document, are where you present the details of
your work. Each section requires a well-defined topic, with each paragraph addressing a
single aspect of that topic. It should be easy for a reader to identify the topic you are
discussing at any point in the essay. Paragraphs and sections need to be linked by some
kind of logical association. This may be chronological, i.e. starting with the original ideas
that preceded the development of the machine or idea and then describing how the
machine or idea evolved year by year, or you may prefer to divide a topic up by the
different areas needed for an overall understanding.
Whichever categorization you select, it is important to make things obvious to the
reader. Section topics are given by the section title, but the first sentence should also
make the topic clear. Sub-paragraphs, within a section, can be given optional
subheadings, but the topic of the paragraph should emerge clearly with or without a
heading.
A good way to think of sections and paragraphs is that they are like mini-essays in their
own right. Each section needs an introductory and concluding paragraph, to introduce
and describe the section’s topic and then to summarise what the section has said. Just
like the middle sections of the essay, the middle paragraphs of a section provide the
actual details, with all the details relating to the topic of the paragraph. Similarly, a
paragraph requires an introductory and concluding sentence. A good concluding
sentence not only sums up the main point of a paragraph, but can also provide a link to
the next paragraph (this may sometimes require two sentences, depending on your
writing style and the general flow of the essay).The main quality that should emerge from your work is that of an organic unity.
Everything in the essay should link together and flow. This requires planning the
document in advance, so that you understand the logical structure behind what you are
saying. Then each sentence should be logically linked to its successor, both in terms of
content and with the judicial use of connectives (i.e., hence, therefore, in addition,
consequently, as a result of this, etc). Sentences link to form paragraphs, which logically
link to form sections, which create the finished document.
Conclusion
A summary or conclusion (as with an introduction) is a necessary part of an essay, and
is used to sum up the body of the material presented. Therefore, it should not
introduce any new idea rather it should pull out and simply re-express the most
important ideas that have already been explained. An exception to this rule is the final
paragraph of a conclusion, which may be used to describe any future work that may
arise out of the ideas you have presented.
In a piece of persuasive writing, the conclusion is often used to drive the main point of
an argument home to the reader. However, in this essay, the purpose is to be
descriptive and explanatory. Therefore, the conclusion should present an overview of
where you see technology going in the years to come.
Referencing
Your essay must be based on a range of source documentation, and all sources must be
properly referenced. For the purposes of this course, we shall use the American
Psychological Association (APA) referencing standard. All referencing standards are
precise, and the APA standard is no exception. While there is an APA publication
manual, which would be cited as follows: (American Psychological Association, 2001),
there are other on-line resources that explain in detail how to reference printed
material and electronic resources (Lesley University, 2005). You are strongly advised to
use these sources. Please pay special attention in laying out your references and
citations, as the correct use of indents, commas, semi-colons, ampersands, etc, must be
strictly respected in academic writing.
In particular, you must use in text citations to show the sources of your work, for
example (Smith, 2005) after you have written about what Smith has said. You must
include the source, (in this example Smith) in your list of references. However, this is
only the first part of referencing. Every time you rely on information from one of your
references in your essay you also have to provide an in text citation. For example,
Gottfried Leibniz is famous for inventing the stepped drum mechanism (Thornton,
2007). In the previous sentence, the in text citation links back to the referenced book or
article. If you use an in text citation there must be a corresponding reference in your
reference list and the name that starts the reference must also be the name you use in
the in text citation. Conversely, every reference in your reference list must be cited in
the essay at least once (otherwise it is a bibliography).An in text citation simply contains the name of the author followed by a comma and
the date of publication all contained in brackets. You can also include the page number
in a citation. This is optional if you have paraphrased a source (i.e. expressed it in your
own words), but if you quote something then you must include the page number.
If you quote more than 40 words then you should indent the whole quotation In text
citations where there are two authors are handled as follows: Heisenberg’s proposal of
the uncertainty principle (Wheeler & Zurek, 1983) caused the whole notion of
determinism in science to be questioned. Citations with more than two authors just
contain the first author’s name followed by et al. (Brooks et al., 1995).
Plagiarism
Do not just copy and paste text from on-line sources into your essay without
referencing them. In other words do not pass off someone else's writing as your own.
This is academic misconduct. The online plagiarism checker will detect this and report it
to the course convenor, and this could get you a zero for that assessment item. You can
use other people's ideas, expressing them in your own words, that is fine. You should
also mention whose ideas they were, for example "Marshall McLuhan observed that
consumers in the 2oth Century ..." and have a reference in APA style at the (i.e
McLuhan, Marshal, 1976, The Medium is the Message, Viking Press, New York).
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