Assessment feedback BUSS 1057 Business and Society Assignment 2: AV presentation Please include the Feedback sheet when submitting the assignment on Gradebook. Please complete the ‘rubrics’ in the block at the bottom of the page to indicate your own evaluation of the assignment against the assessment criteria. Student name ID number Key Assignment criteria Performance on this component Comment Very Poor Poor Fair Good Excell-ent Background 5 marks Identifying the key features of a business and describing it succinctly Identifying and describing the issues relating to environmental sustainability and strategies taken to alleviate it by the organisation Building the argument 15 marks Definitions of environmental sustainability Explaining how the chosen activity contributes to considering environmental sustainability impact by the organisation Explaining how this is a global contribution Communication 5 marks Accessibility or convincingness of argument Effective use of audio-visual techniques Proper acknowledgement of sources Summary comment, including two things which would improve the assignment: Assignment grade GQ7: demonstrate an international perspective Rubrics: this table indicates how the performance on each of the criteria is assessed; you can assess your own achievement here criterion, element very poor poor fair good Excellent Identifying the business Not a business or no description Insufficient info to recognise as a business Major features clearly put Easy to grasp features of business Concise, clear introduction to key features Identifying the activity No statement Insufficient context Main features of activity listed Easy to grasp activity Concise, clear discussion of activity Definition of environmental sustainability No definition Minimal definition, probably general not environmental Simple definition included Definition in context of the business Clear definition, statement about relevance Explaining how activity contributes to environmental sustainability No statement Vague statement of contribution, not linked to definition Contribution clear, implied link to definition Definition used to show how activity contributes Activity, definition contribution are clearly linked Explaining global contribution Not covered Asserted without support Identifies some global elements Clearly explains Gives indication of challenges overcome Accessibility or convincingness of argument and effective use of AV Comprehension difficult Hard to follow, AV overwhelms message On time, clear message, images help Easy viewing, message clear, integrated Joy and enlightenment for viewer Proper acknowledgement of sources Used but not acknowledged Some major sources not listed NA or all major sources listed Full and correct list Integrated in presentation