Reflective Writing
Task 3 TBS963
Dr Ruth Walker
[email protected] in TBS963
1. Report: literature review, your own good
practice standards, discussion (2000w)
2. Report: case study analysis with appropriate
responses, existing options, your referral
process & personal reflection (1500w)
3. Report: self-assessment of your own
coaching practice, comparison with
feedback, critical reflection & plan (1500w)
4. Exams: long and short answer essays• review referencing strategies
• preparation for the next assignments:
• self-assessment report
• exams – essays and short answers
• language strategies for critical reflection
Any other questions about academic and critical
writing?
agendareview of referencing
Keep checking the UOW Harvard author/date
website for referencing conventions both in-text
and in a reference list.
Some more tips:
If you suggest you have read more than one article,
e.g., “Studies demonstrate ….” have more than
one reference in-text and in the reference list.
Large blocks of quotations are counterproductive if
there is no analysis/connection to your point. Do
not assume the marker will know what you are
trying to say. Provide all relevant information.quote found in
another source
Imagine you’ve found a good quote on page 200 of
Abdullah, Boyle and Joham’s article (2011). How
could you use it yourself?result
Geert Hofstede (cited in Abdullah et al 2011 p200)
argued that “culture is not a characteristic of
individuals; it encompasses a number of people who
were conditioned by the same education and life
experience”.sample paragraph A:
whose ideas are they?
Training and development activities have been identified as crucial
to organizational growth and survival in today’s competitive
world (Dee Saa-Davis, 2006). Training programs increase
employee skills, which has a direct impact on employee
productivity (Huselid, 1995). In addition, training is an effective
way to overcome the factors that decrease employee job
performance and satisfaction (Xiao, 1996). Like job security,
training and development requires a certain degree of
reciprocity: a company that continuously trains and develops its
employees is actually increasing the market value of its
employees, which affects employees’ productivity, commitment
and may decrease the motivation to quit the company (Vlachos,
2008).oops….
all other peoples’ ideas
Training and development activities have been identified as crucial
to organizational growth and survival in today’s competitive
world (Dee Saa-Davis, 2006). Training programs increase
employee skills, which has a direct impact on employee
productivity (Huselid, 1995). In addition, training is an effective
way to overcome the factors that decrease employee job
performance and satisfaction (Xiao, 1996). Like job security,
training and development requires a certain degree of
reciprocity: a company that continuously trains and develops its
employees is actually increasing the market value of its
employees, which affects employees’ productivity, commitment
and may decrease the motivation to quit the company (Vlachos,
2008).
This makes it seem like a patchwork of research sources – where
is the analysis? The student’s voice?sample B:
does this work better? how?
Globalization has accelerated the transfer of not only product and
services, but also corporate management practices. The
transfer of HRM practices occurs mostly from developed
countries to developing ones (Aycan, 2005). MNCs operating in
many countries with different socio-economic and cultural
orientations face serious challenges in implementing Western
HRM practices in the developing countries (Jaeger & Kanungo,
1990). Effective implementation of HRM practices is largely
dependant on the extent to which the practices are perceived to
be appropriate by managers and their subordinates (Eveg &
Eqile, 1993). Therefore, a thorough understanding of the cultural
and other contextual elements where HRM practices are being
implemented is required in order to maximize the outcome.topic sentence &
concluding sentence
Globalization has accelerated the transfer of not only product and
services, but also corporate management practices. The
transfer of HRM practices occurs mostly from developed
countries to developing ones (Aycan, 2005). MNCs operating in
many countries with different socio-economic and cultural
orientations face serious challenges in implementing Western
HRM practices in the developing countries (Jaeger & Kanungo,
1990). Effective implementation of HRM practices is largely
dependant on the extent to which the practices are perceived to
be appropriate by managers and their subordinates (Eveg &
Eqile, 1993). Therefore, a thorough understanding of the cultural
and other contextual elements where HRM practices are being
implemented is required in order to maximize the outcome.sample c:
reviewing the literature
A number of studies have been conducted exploring this
relationship between employees‟ cultural orientations and
organizational HRM practices (Aycan, 2005; Wilson, 2008; Liu,
2011). Sparrow and Wu (1998) used the cultural orientation
framework to predict HRM preferences of Taiwanese
employees. Nyambegara et al. (2000) used the cultural
orientation framework to explore the impact of cultural
orientations on individual HRM preferences in the Kenyan
context. Both studies concluded that a significant relationship
exists between employees‟ cultural orientations and their
preference for particular HRM practices. The study presented
here, in particular, will explore the relationship between
Bangladesh employees’ cultural orientations and organizational
HRM practices.TBS963 assignment 3
Activity:
Each student will demonstrate active listening and
questioning skills to a coachee (a fellow student)
Coaching feedback:
1. The coachee will give you their feedback on their
experience
2. An observer (a fellow student) will give you feedback
on your use of active listening and questioning skills
during the session.
3. You will complete a self-assessment of your own
performance (using the standards you developed in
Assignment 1).writing it up
You will submit a 1500 word report:
1. an assessment of your skills against the standards of
good practice in listening and questioning that you
identified in Assignment 1
2. a comparison of your self-assessment with the
feedback obtained from your fellow students (i.e. the
coachee & observer)
3. a reflection on what you have learned from the
research you have conducted during TBS 963, the
coaching skills feedback you received, and what you
have learned from observing others coach
4. a plan for developing your coaching skillswhat is reflective practice?
Reflective practice is the process of examining what has
happened to encourage professional and/or personal
growth and is typically used in professions where field
experience and academic study are closely aligned.what is critical reflection?
“Critical reflection is taken to mean a deliberate process
when the candidate takes time, within the course of
their work, to focus on their performance and think
carefully about the thinking that led to particular
actions, what happened and what they are learning
from the experience, in order to inform what they
might do in the future.”
(QCA quoted in King 2006, p2)Bloom’s six levels of learningStages of learning How students learn
Transformative learning Meaningful, reflective,
restructured by
learner – idiosyncratic or
creative
Working with meaning Meaningful, reflective, well
structured
Making meaning Meaningful, well integrated,
ideas linked
Making sense Reproduction of ideas,
ideas not well linked
Noticing Memorise representationDescriptive writing reports events. Its main
purpose is to provide a support or a starting
point for the framework. You can move into
descriptive reflection, where you attempt to
provide reasons based upon personal judgment
Critical writing and reflection involves giving
reasons for decisions or events, which takes
into account the broader contexts, whether they
be social, cultural or discipline specific. You
would attempt to link theory to practice.
from descriptive to critical & reflectivereflective writing
Reflective writing gives you an opportunity to
explore situations from a personal perspective,
but generally within the context of learning from
specific experiences.
The questions to be asked while critically
reflecting should be:
- what did you do and why?
- what did your peer understand from this, and how did
they respond/give feedback
- what are the implications for your future work?Some writers become confused between self-reflection
and self-criticism. You need to go beyond simply
admitting a weakness or mistake or failure – what is
important is not only what you did, but how you felt,
what you have learnt from that experience, and how it
will inform your behaviour in the future.
Try not to confine your writing to the event and your
feelings. If possible, use it to raise new questions or to
speculate about possible causes and solutions.
Remember where possible to link your reflections to
theoretical aspects of your course. !
self-criticism and self-reflectionthe reflective process
1. awareness of a situation
* may be a positive or negative event
2. critical reflection
* integrate the event, theory & your reaction
* hypothesis testing
3. new perspective
* understanding of the event at a deeper level
(Scanlon & Chernomas, 1997)so what do you write about?
The components of your reflections could
include:
• event description
• your reaction
• discussion & analysis
• outcome
• future directionshow do I write it?
Reflective writing is more personal and so won’t
necessarily have the same qualities as more
academic writing. However, keep in mind that
you will need to convert this to an academic
style essay, and both styles should include:
• clear written communication skills
• a range of evidence
• links to the your assignment 1 good practicesome writing tips
Academic writing generally avoids:
• contractions
• colloquialisms/slang
• rhetorical questions
• everyday vocabulary
• active voicelanguage traps
in reflective writing
Colloquial language
• “I was outside my comfort zone”.
Capitalisation
• “The Client spoke to the coach”.
Complete sentences
• In English, sentences need a subject (doer)
and a verb (something done)Avoid emotive/judgemental language
• “I found a wonderful article”.
Correct punctuation
• “The clients notes..”
• “In it’s place…”
Contractions
• “I didn’t manage the activity very well.”avoid generalisations
• “I need to improve my communications
skills” (how?)
• “I must be aware of appropriate behaviour” (what
is that?)
• “The activity was a rewarding experience” (how?)Avoid writing too informally: just because your
reflective critique is based on your
experience or interpretation does not mean
you can ignore academic style
writing style
In my opinion, if there are
too many 'buts' in my
choosing to practice in a
rural area then I must not
be ready for it, so it's
better for me to stay put in
the city.
The reservations I currently
feel about practicing in a
rural setting suggest that I
am not yet ready for such a
move. So at this stage I plan
to work in the city on
graduation.avoid being judgemental
I was shocked when the doctor showed
me the patient's file without seeking
consent. His disregard for the rules
regarding patient consent caused me to
lose respect for him and
to question his ethical standards.
I was surprised when the doctor
showed me the patient's file without
seeking consent. It made me realise
that discrepancies can exist between
what is taught on course and the way
in which medicine is practised in
reality. From my own perspective, as
a future doctor I would seek to
maintain high ethical standards, and
to encourage that among staff under
my supervision.models of reflective writing
The following slides & handout have some
examples of poor/good reflective writing.
They have been sourced from reflective journals
written by medical students in the GSM
program and from a management subject at
SBS.Despite being taught how to break bad news, when I went to tell a grandson that his
granddad had died in the A&E room, I found the conversation went disastrously.
As I entered the room I was bombarded with questions. Without hesitating I
proceeded to describe the events of the cardiac arrest resuscitation attempt. I
felt that the grandson had understood what he had been told. However, when I
finally asked, “Do you have any questions you would like to ask?” Straight away
the grandson replied, “Yeah, how is he now?” I was extremely annoyed. I had
spent the last 10 minutes going into detail about our efforts and the grandson
had clearly not been listening to my explanation. Either that, or he just wanted to
make a point that it was our fault. Working in a hospital is an extremely difficult
job and I just don’t think the public understand the pressure that we are under. I
work as hard as I can and don’t appreciate when people blame us for everything
that goes wrong. Its not my fault the old guy died, I did everything that I could.
Why don’t they understand that it is extremely difficult on us when we lose a
patient? Yet the family members are just concerned about themselves. Just
once I would like someone to pat me on the back and tell me I did a good job.
Just once!
So in the end, I just told the grandson that his grandfather had passed away. I could
tell by the look in his eye that he blamed me for what went wrong. I walked away
knowing that we aren’t really appreciated as doctors. What’s the point? We just
get blamed when things go wrong and never get congratulated when we do
something right. The system is unfair.
example 1Despite being taught how to break bad news, when I went to tell a
grandson that his granddad had died in the A&E room, I found the
conversation went disastrously. As I entered the room I was bombarded
with questions. Without hesitating I proceeded to describe the events of
the cardiac arrest resuscitation attempt. I felt that the grandson had
understood what he had been told. However, when I finally asked, “Do
you have any questions you would like to ask?” Straight away the
grandson replied, “Yeah, how is he now?” I was extremely annoyed. I had
spent the last 10 minutes going into detail about our efforts and the
grandson had clearly not been listening to my explanation. Either that, or
he just wanted to make a point that it was our fault. Working in a hospital
is an extremely difficult job and I just don’t think the public understand the
pressure that we are under. I work as hard as I can and don’t appreciate
when people blame us for everything that goes wrong. Its not my fault the
old guy died, I did everything that I could. Why don’t they understand that
it is extremely difficult on us when we lose a patient? Yet the family
members are just concerned about themselves. Just once I would like
someone to pat me on the back and tell me I did a good job. Just once!
So in the end, I just told the grandson that his grandfather had passed
away. I could tell by the look in his eye that he blamed me for what went
wrong. I walked away knowing that we aren’t really appreciated as
doctors. What’s the point? We just get blamed when things go wrong and
never get congratulated when we do something right. The system is
unfair.
no context
overall reaction
event
description
reaction
extended
reaction
event
reactionDuring my weekly mentoring sessions I developed a goal to take on more
responsibility in the hospital. I have been working in the emergency
department for 1 year, but have tended to leave the more difficult aspects
of my job to more senior colleagues. With this goal in mind, following the
death of an elderly patient in the A&E room, I decided to break the news
to the patients’ grandson; however, I found that the conversation to not
go as I had planned. As I entered the room I was quickly asked what
happened. Without hesitating I proceeded to describe the events of the
cardiac arrest resuscitation attempt. I felt that the grandson had
understood what he had been told. When I finally asked, “Do you have
any questions you would like to ask?”, and straight away the grandson
replied, “Yeah, how is he now?”, I was taken aback. Whilst I interpreted
the grandsons’ solemn mood and nodding of his head to indicate that he
understood my message, he clearly had not understood my explanation.
I then had to state that his grandfather “had died” and leave, knowing
that I had not handled the situation as well as I would have like and
concerned that I may have made the situation worse for the grandson.
context
event
description
Immediate
reaction
event and reactionThe next few slides conform to the reflection
structure and the there is more of a focus on
what happened.
The reflective process is aided by literature and
mentors and there is a connection between
what happened, future practice and how the
process is used as a learning tool.
The language conforms to academic writing
protocols better than the first example.Following my shift I found that I kept thinking about how I handled the
situation less well than I would have liked. A range of articles that
discussed breaking bad news and reflected on factors that may influence
how well family members or patients receive the message was useful
(Girgis & Sanson-Fisher 1995; Ptacek & Eberhardt 1996). They
suggested that family members may be feeling overwhelmed, not ready
to hear a great deal of detail and not fully able to comprehend the
situation. I am sure if I were in a similar situation I would also find it
extremely difficult to take in information. It is likely that the stress involved
in bringing his grandfather into hospital influenced the grandsons’ ability
to comprehend my message. Whilst I was intending to talk to the
grandson in a caring and compassionate way, I used language that did
not easily express the message I was trying to convey. Rather than
initially stating that his grandfather had “died”, I indicated that our
attempts had “not been successful”. On reflection, this statement could
have easily been misinterpreted, especially by a stressed and
overwhelmed family member.
reflectionFollowing my shift I found that I kept thinking about how I handled the
situation less well than I would have liked. A range of articles that
discussed breaking bad news and reflected on factors that may influence
how well family members or patients receive the message was useful
(Girgis & Sanson-Fisher 1995; Ptacek & Eberhardt 1996). They
suggested that family members may be feeling overwhelmed, not ready
to hear a great deal of detail and not fully able to comprehend the
situation. I am sure if I were in a similar situation I would also find it
extremely difficult to take in information. It is likely that the stress involved
in bringing his grandfather into hospital influenced the grandsons’ ability
to comprehend my message. Whilst I was intending to talk to the
grandson in a caring and compassionate way, I used language that did
not easily express the message I was trying to convey. Rather than
initially stating that his grandfather had “died”, I indicated that our
attempts had “not been successful”. On reflection, this statement could
have easily been misinterpreted, especially by a stressed and
overwhelmed family member.
Topic
sentence
structure of reflectionFollowing my shift I found that I kept thinking about how I handled the
situation less well than I would have liked. A range of articles that
discussed breaking bad news and reflected on factors that may influence
how well family members or patients receive the message was useful
(Girgis & Sanson-Fisher 1995; Ptacek & Eberhardt 1996). They
suggested that family members may be feeling overwhelmed, not ready
to hear a great deal of detail and not fully able to comprehend the
situation. I am sure if I were in a similar situation I would also find it
extremely difficult to take in information. It is likely that the stress involved
in bringing his grandfather into hospital influenced the grandsons’ ability
to comprehend my message. Whilst I was intending to talk to the
grandson in a caring and compassionate way, I used language that did
not easily express the message I was trying to convey. Rather than
initially stating that his grandfather had “died”, I indicated that our
attempts had “not been successful”. On reflection, this statement could
have easily been misinterpreted, especially by a stressed and
overwhelmed family member.
Topic
sentence
evidence
sentences
that explain
the
evidence or
elaborate
on the topic
sentencecritical feedback
When critically analysing an event or text you are
not looking for information only, you should
look for ways of thinking.
The questions to be asked while reading critically
include:
• how is it argued?
• how is the evidence used and interpreted?
• how does the text reach its conclusion?
But what kind of questions should you be asking
when peer-reviewing another student?suggested first draft notes
Description Describe what happened in the peer feedback
session - set the scene
Feelings What were your feelings and reactions?
Evaluation What was good and bad about the experience?
Analysis What sense can you make of the experience and
your reactions?
Conclusions (general) What can be concluded, in a general sense, from
the peer feedback experience and the analyses you
have undertaken?
Conclusions (specific) What can be concluded about your own specific,
unique, personal approach or ways of working?
Personal action plan What are you going to do differently in this type of
situation next time? What steps are you going to
take on the basis of what you have learned?introduction
Make sure that you set up your report to
be a critical reflection, and that you
orient the reader to your focus and line
of argumentintroduction example A
A group is defined as “two or more interacting and independent
individuals who come together to achieve particular goals”. My
management group consisted of five members. Our group is an
informal group as we were established naturally in the class. We
were given the objective of completing the first two assessments
in this group. Over the nine weeks that my group worked
together, we moved through the stages of group development
quite quickly. We reached the stage of adjourning by week nine.
Throughout the period all members were actively involved in the
process of managerial communication, planning, leadership,
motivation and decision-making, to the best of our ability except
one. The topic we chose to research was xxx. I recorded my
experiences throughout the period in a journal.introduction example B
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical evaluation
of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of areas in need of
improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and analysis will
concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’, ‘leadership’
and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared and
contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses the
management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels. The second
section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and concentrates on the
emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of leadership styles and
group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group tendency to engage in
informal planning, when participative formal project plan could have established
clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be argued that whilst our
‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved completion of the task with high
group satisfaction, a variety of improvements could have been made to increase
efficiency.orientation to topic
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical
approach to management has been experienced. This essay will provide a
critical evaluation of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of
areas in need of improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and
analysis will concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’,
‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared
and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses the
management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels. The second
section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and concentrates on the
emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of leadership styles and
group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group tendency to engage in
informal planning, when participative formal project plan could have established
clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be argued that whilst our
‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved completion of the task with high
group satisfaction, a variety of improvements could have been made to increase
efficiency.clearly states the purpose
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical
evaluation of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of
areas in need of improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection
and analysis will concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and
communication’, ‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience
will be compared and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges
the typical understanding of sequenced stages of group development and
analyses the management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels.
The second section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and
concentrates on the emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of
leadership styles and group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group
tendency to engage in informal planning, when participative formal project plan
could have established clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be
argued that whilst our ‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved
completion of the task with high group satisfaction, a variety of improvements
could have been made to increase efficiency.identifies the selected topics
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical evaluation
of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of areas in need of
improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and analysis will
concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’,
‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared
and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses the
management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels. The second
section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and concentrates on the
emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of leadership styles and
group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group tendency to engage in
informal planning, when participative formal project plan could have established
clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be argued that whilst our
‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved completion of the task with high
group satisfaction, a variety of improvements could have been made to increase
efficiency.outlines first topic analysis
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical evaluation
of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of areas in need of
improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and analysis will
concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’,
‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared
and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses
the management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels.
The second section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and
concentrates on the emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of
leadership styles and group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group
tendency to engage in informal planning, when participative formal project plan
could have established clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be
argued that whilst our ‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved
completion of the task with high group satisfaction, a variety of improvements
could have been made to increase efficiency.outlines second topic analysis
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical evaluation
of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of areas in need of
improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and analysis will
concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’,
‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared
and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses the
management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels. The second
section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and concentrates
on the emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of
leadership styles and group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group
tendency to engage in informal planning, when participative formal project plan
could have established clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be
argued that whilst our ‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved
completion of the task with high group satisfaction, a variety of improvements
could have been made to increase efficiency.outlines third topic analysis
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical evaluation
of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of areas in need of
improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and analysis will
concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’,
‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared
and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses the
management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels. The second
section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and concentrates on the
emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of leadership styles and
group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group tendency to engage
in informal planning, when participative formal project plan could have
established clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be argued
that whilst our ‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved completion of the
task with high group satisfaction, a variety of improvements could have been
made to increase efficiency.concludes with
recommendations
After two months of working with a team of four people, a practical approach to
management has been experienced. This essay will provide a critical evaluation
of my perception of the group’s performance and discussion of areas in need of
improvement. For the purpose of this task, such reflection and analysis will
concentrate on the areas of ‘managing groups and communication’,
‘leadership’ and ‘planning’, whereby the practical experience will be compared
and contrasted to the theory. The first discussion challenges the typical
understanding of sequenced stages of group development and analyses the
management of conflict whilst evaluating communication channels. The second
section on leadership analyses the struggle for control and concentrates on the
emergence of the eventual leaders through an analysis of leadership styles and
group dynamics. The last discussion outlines the group tendency to engage in
informal planning, when participative formal project plan could have established
clearer goals, group roles and expectations. It will be argued that whilst our
‘organisation’ was effective in that we achieved completion of the task with
high group satisfaction, a variety of improvements could have been made
to increase efficiency.the body of your report
You have been given 4 sections to include in
the body of this report.
In each section, pay attention to your
paragraphs, which should:
• be logically ordered
• introduce and elaborate on one particular idea
• draw on evidence from the peer feedback experience
• not merely summarise or add theory without direct
application to aspects of the experience.make it work!
Students can get carried away with describing all the
theory they have learnt this session, rather than
developing an integrated argument that directly
addresses the concept or issue.
Beware that you are not ‘filling’ your essay with a
whole range of irrelevant material.example body paragraph 1
Group decision-making is a process orientation that is defined
by the characteristics of group work. Because of the
complexities of group work and the development of internal
structures that support the capacity of a group to determine
particular group focus, it can be asserted that the quelling of
individual dissonance is directly related to the progression of
components within the group, including elements like
leadership. The development of groupthink is based on the
capacity of the group and of the leader to support basic
constructs that relate to group action and base decisions not
merely on generalised agreement, but on the determinations
made in correlation with existing leadership. Group dynamics
then progress as an extension of leadership and other definable
characteristics of a group (Gray et al. 1989, p592).a better example
1. The traditional concept of stages of group development assumes there
is a general pattern to group evolvement, where a group passes through
sequenced phases (Robbins et al. 2006, p488). Whilst we began at the
forming stage (Journal p.3), the characteristics of creating structure and
clear leadership never appeared in the initial phase. The role of
leadership was often taken on by up to three members (Journal p82).
Furthermore, the group lapsed back into the norming stage during midsession when it seemed performing was just beginning (Journal p32, 17,
19-20). In practice, I felt that the stages of group development were not
sequenced, but rather a fluid process was experienced, or as Gerick
described, “a pattern of punctuated equilibrium with alternating
inertia” (1988, p9). This understanding is also supported by Kakabadse
et al (1988, p360) who believes that groups frequently fluctuate between
phases.summarises relevant theory
The traditional concept of stages of group development assumes there
is a general pattern to group evolvement, where a group passes
through sequenced phases (Robbins et al. 2006, p488). Whilst we
began at the forming stage (Journal p.3), the characteristics of creating
structure and clear leadership never appeared in the initial phase. The
role of leadership was often taken on by up to three members (Journal
p82). Furthermore, the group lapsed back into the norming stage during
mid-session when it seemed performing was just beginning (Journal
p32, 17, 19-20). In practice, I felt that the stages of group development
were not sequenced, but rather a fluid process was experienced, or as
Gerick described, “a pattern of punctuated equilibrium with alternating
inertia” (1988, p9). This understanding is also supported by Kakabadse
et al (1988, p360) who believes that groups frequently fluctuate
between phases.relates to the experience
The traditional concept of stages of group development assumes there
is a general pattern to group evolvement, where a group passes
through sequenced phases (Robbins et al. 2006, p488). Whilst we
began at the forming stage (Journal p.3), the characteristics of creating
structure and clear leadership never appeared in the initial phase. The
role of leadership was often taken on by up to three members (Journal
p82). Furthermore, the group lapsed back into the norming stage during
mid-session when it seemed performing was just beginning (Journal
p32, 17, 19-20). In practice, I felt that the stages of group development
were not sequenced, but rather a fluid process was experienced, or as
Gerick described, “a pattern of punctuated equilibrium with alternating
inertia” (1988, p9). This understanding is also supported by Kakabadse
et al (1988, p360) who believes that groups frequently fluctuate
between phases.interprets discrepancy
The traditional concept of stages of group development assumes there
is a general pattern to group evolvement, where a group passes
through sequenced phases (Robbins et al. 2006, p488). Whilst we
began at the forming stage (Journal p.3), the characteristics of creating
structure and clear leadership never appeared in the initial phase. The
role of leadership was often taken on by up to three members (Journal
p82). Furthermore, the group lapsed back into the norming stage during
mid-session when it seemed performing was just beginning (Journal
p32, 17, 19-20). In practice, I felt that the stages of group development
were not sequenced, but rather a fluid process was experienced, or as
Gerick described, “a pattern of punctuated equilibrium with alternating
inertia” (1988, p9). This understanding is also supported by Kakabadse
et al (1988, p360) who believes that groups frequently fluctuate
between phases.reinforces with evidence
The traditional concept of stages of group development assumes there
is a general pattern to group evolvement, where a group passes
through sequenced phases (Robbins et al. 2006, p488). Whilst we
began at the forming stage (Journal p3), the characteristics of creating
structure and clear leadership never appeared in the initial phase. The
role of leadership was often taken on by up to three members (Journal
p82). Furthermore, the group lapsed back into the norming stage during
mid-session when it seemed performing was just beginning (Journal
p32, 17, 19-20). In practice, I felt that the stages of group development
were not sequenced, but rather a fluid process was experienced, or as
Gerick described, “a pattern of punctuated equilibrium with alternating
inertia” (1988, p9). This understanding is also supported by Kakabadse
et al (1988, p360) who believes that groups frequently fluctuate
between phases.final exam tips
For TBS963 you have short essays and
long essays for the exam:
• plan ahead – organise your notes
• on the day, make sure you answer the
question and don’t just discuss the
topic!notes on section X of the subject
Course
outline !
Chapter!
from !
textbook!
Lecture !
tutorial
notes!
TOPIC A!
TOPIC A!
Quizzes!
Assignments!
readings! Course outline!! Chapter from! !
textbook !
Lecture/!
tutorial!
notes!
Quizzes/!
assignments/!
readings!
TOPIC B!
TOPIC B!
SECTION X!
CONDENSED
FOR EACH
MAIN TOPIC!
SUMMARY SHEET
FOR EACH MAIN
TOPIC!
MASTER SUMMARY SHEET FOR
SECTION x OF THE COURSE!writing long essays in exams
• decide which questions to answer
• allocate time evenly to each question
• look carefully at instructional words
• draft a rough essay outline before
beginning to write
• answer the question explicitly in the first
sentence
• finish questions on time – but use bullet
points if necessary to complete the answer
quicklythe essay-writing process
• Carefully and thoroughly analyse the
essay question:
– determine the key concepts (the topic/s) in
the question
– determine what the question is asking you
to do (i.e. the purpose/s of the question)sample exam essay 1
Identify the unique problems faced in trying to
motivate minimum-wage employees. Discuss,
with examples, two theories that can be
implemented to motivate these types of
employees.
- What is the question about? (topic)
- How do you need to answer it? (purpose)sample exam essay 2
‘Referencing is the single most important
skill a business student needs to learn.’
Critically analyse this statement,
reflecting on your own experience at
university and examples of possibly
relevant scenarios in business
coaching.
Write a quick sample introduction