1 2 3 4 5 ASSESMENT 1 GRADEMARK REPORT FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS 11/0 Instructor PAGE 1 Comment 1 Good ef f ort with room to improve. Please see the comments inside. Comment 2 Title? PAGE 2 PAGE 3 PAGE 4 Comment 3 This is not a magazine write up. Need to choose your words f or a research / academic article. PAGE 5 PAGE 6 PAGE 7 PAGE 8 Comment 4 The discussion needs to expand this f urther to include context and application. Further this needs to be supported by other research or IT articles. PAGE 9 PAGE 10 PAGE 11 PAGE 12 PAGE 13 Comment 5 Where has this been used? Industry ? Outcome? PAGE 14 PAGE 15 PAGE 16 PAGE 17 PAGE 18