Proposal presentation by Arjun Dhakal FILE TIME SUBMITTED 10-APR-2017 12:30PM SUBMISSION ID 796942640 WORD COUNT 969 CHARACTER COUNT 6471 PRESENTATION_SLIDES_ARJUN.PPTX (482.11K) FINAL GRADE /35 Proposal presentation GRADEMARK REPORT GENERAL COMMENTS Instructor PAGE 1 PAGE 2 PAGE 3 Comment 1 you should describe what is the current situation and/or the problem instead of the purpose or aim of your research PAGE 4 Comment 2 Ha and Jang (2013) PAGE 5 Comment 3 What is the Gap and implication for your research? PAGE 6 Comment 4 ....evaluate the effectiveness of ..... PAGE 7 Comment 5 Justification and reference? Comment 6 Qual or Quant? PAGE 8 Comment 7 Sampling strategy? Comment 8 ? PAGE 9 PAGE 10 Comment 9 - your proposed questions should be linked to literature and aim to address your research aim - avoid using closed ended questions PAGE 11 PAGE 12 PAGE 13 Comment 10 informed consent form QM PAGE 14 Comment 11 inconsistent? PAGE 15 Improper referencing style The reference list needs to be complete and consistent in its style and format i.e. Harvard PAGE 16 RUBRIC: REPORT PROPOSAL TEMPLATE CRITERION 1 (20%) HIGH DISTINCTION (100) DISTINCTION (80) CREDIT (70) PASS (60) FAIL (49) CRITERION 2 (30%) HIGH DISTINCTION (100) DISTINCTION (80) CREDIT (70) PASS (60) FAIL (49) 0 / 100 0 / 100 Overview (Rationale for the proposal) Excellent overview demonstrating superior understanding of key issues. Comprehensive overview demonstrating sophisticated understanding of key issues. Competent overview demonstrating solid understanding of key issues. Adequate overview however could provide more detail of key issues. Overview not well articulated, hard to follow. Key issues poorly explained. 0 / 100 Proposal outline Excellent and well-structured proposal with an insightful focus. Demonstrates a sophisticated understanding of Xxxx and key issues in Xxxx. Excellent understanding of the complexity and sensitivity of issues. Comprehensive and well-structured proposal with a clear focus. Demonstrates a clear understanding of Xxxx and key issues in Xxxx. Very good understanding of the complexity and sensitivity of issues. Capable and well-structured proposal. Demonstrates a solid understanding of Xxxx and key issues in Xxxx. Good understanding of the complexity and sensitivity of issues. Reasonably well-structured proposal. Demonstrates a fair understanding of Xxxx and key issues in Xxxx. Basic understanding of the complexity and sensitivity of issues. Poorly structured proposal. Little or no understanding of Xxxx and key issues in Xxxx. Poor understanding of the complexity and sensitivity of issues. CRITERION 3 (20%) HIGH DISTINCTION (100) DISTINCTION (80) CREDIT (70) PASS (60) FAIL (49) CRITERION 4 (20%) HIGH DISTINCTION (100) DISTINCTION (80) CREDIT (70) PASS (60) FAIL (49) CRITERION 5 (10%) 0 / 100 Research Numerous relevant scholarly sources. Highly relevant integration of key elements of the syllabus. Sources skilfully incorporated into proposal. Considerable relevant scholarly sources. Very good integration of key elements of the syllabus. Sources capably incorporated into proposal. Several relevant scholarly sources. Good integration of key elements of the syllabus. Sources well incorporated into proposal. Minimal relevant scholarly sources. Some integration of key elements of the syllabus. Sources barely incorporated into proposal. No relevant scholarly sources. Basic integration of key elements of the syllabus. Sources not incorporated into proposal. 0 / 100 Grammar and writing Completely free of grammatical errors. Extremely well written. Essentially free of grammatical errors. Very well written. A few grammatical errors. Capable writing. Grammatical errors. Adequate writing. Grammatical errors. Adequate writing. 0 / 100 HIGH DISTINCTION (100) DISTINCTION (80) CREDIT (70) PASS (60) FAIL (49) Referencing All citations, in-text and footnotes, follow required style. Comprehensive and correct reference list All citations, in-text and footnotes, follow required style. Comprehensive and correct reference list All citations, in-text and footnotes, follow required style. Comprehensive and correct reference list All citations, in-text and footnotes, follow required style. Comprehensive and correct reference list All citations, in-text and footnotes, follow required style. Comprehensive and correct reference list