Remarks- Fail Unfortunately it's clear from your assignment that there is little understanding of the expectations of this assignment. It is not very realistic nor feasible to expect in one small qualitative study to uncover the reason why Tesco's performance regarding communication strategies is declining. The literature review should have been based on acadaemic literature (i.e. requirement for at least 5 academic journals) focussed on your research topic - this was not present in your assignment. You refer to quantitative survey method and yet this is a qualitative research proposal. How many participants will you sample? How will they be determined? There are no examples of questions that would be asked. Spell and grammar check your work. Overall, a much greater effort is needed this subject to demonstrate acceptable understanding of research methods. I understand that you have been unwell however there needs to be more understanding of concepts/theories that underpin HRM507 in order to pass. Thank you Donna