ARCH5006 Architectural Research Topics Assignment Two Feedback: Oral Student Number -18290624 Zhen Pang Lee Grade - tbc Criteria Comments Study of the site/case studies - 50% 'TOD of Slow Mode & Fast Mode decide Communities Healthy' - this makes no sense. Suggested title - How does the mode of fast or slow transport affect the design of healthy TOD and places for the community? A reasonable understanding of thedifferences between a walkable TOD Town Centre and car based design. Criteria for assessment of TOD - quality of street network and street design. Ped sheds, key requirements for street design are included. Case study - Leederville and Mirrabooka - go and visit the sites for evaluation rather than using Google! Experience the place! In-depth understanding of the case studies/ reviewed literature as demonstrated in the Program 50% Use of quotes is good. Too much text on your slides - use evocative images to convey the research and in your Oral presentation. Key findings established for Leederville (walkable, slow TOD), however what strategies are in place to ensure it's a good TOD? The study of Mirrabooka is poor - what is the revitalisation strategy; there are new initiatives to improve the place, such as the new reconnected Main Street, more higher quality residential for professionals to help with the economic revival, redevelopment of the Bus Station to make it safer and more appealing to use etc. Nice images that show an'ideal street' - is this Mirrabooka? Is this your own work? Additional work shows some learning, however please be more comprehensive and structure the work carefully so it flows better. Your English still requires editing - the Oral and written English on the slides requires correct use of sentence construction and grammar.