Assignment 3a-Project proposal by Deepak Manivannan
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Assignment 3a-Project proposal
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES Submitted to UNITEC Institute of Technology Student Paper
www.forbes.com Internet Source
www.wlu.ca Internet Source
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Assignment 3a-Project proposal
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS Instructor
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general comment It is hard to see which aspect of TPS is applied here and how. if you explain what is the intended use of the space, who are the stakeholders and what activities are performed in this space, then it is easier to see how TPS can be applied.
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Comment 1 please check your originality report and modify this section
Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewriting.
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as part of this introduction you need to explain what activities are performed in this location and perhaps some indication of workflow
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Comment 2 Do you mean after things went wrong?
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Comment 3 who?
Comment 4 why?
Comment 5 what are those advantages?
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schedule you also need to include schedule
Comment 6 this has to continue
Comment 7 it seems shoes blocking the movement
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workflow as part of this introduction you need to explain what activities are performed in this location and perhaps some indication of workflow
what what are these thing?
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