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ASSESSMENT BRIEF
Subject Code and Title COMR2010- Cultural Diversity: A Personal Perspective
Assessment Reflective Journal entries (3 Parts)
Individual/Group Individual
Length 500 words each journal entry (3 in total)
Learning Outcomes 1. Reflect upon, identify and articulate the
importance of cultural awareness and
understanding of intercultural competence
2. Explain and apply a range of theories needed to
successfully live together in a culturally diverse
world.
3. Identify and apply skills in mindfulness and critical
reflection and awareness that supports your own
development of intercultural competence.
5. Communicate orally and in writing an awareness
and understanding of intercultural competence.
Submission Part A: By 11:55pm AEST/AEDT Friday of Week 4
(Module 2)
Part B: By 11:55pm AEST/AEDT Friday of Week 8
(Module 4)
Part C: By 11:55pm AEST/AEDT Friday of Week 10
(Module 5)
Weighting 15% for each part (45% in total)
Total Marks 100 marks for each part
Context:
Reflective writing is evidence of reflective thinking, and is a process where you can learn from your
experiences. In particular, the reflective journal assessment in this subject supports you to explore
and articulate your intercultural learning and its relevance to your personal, social and professional
life. To guide you in your reflective writing, you will be given “prompts” that will encourage you to
critically consider what you have learnt.
Instructions:
You will complete three reflective journal entries for this subject. For each journal entry, write at least
500 words, drawing specifically from the subject’s learning resources and your own independentCOMR2010_Assignment 2_Journal Page 2 of 8
research (please indicate by using APA referencing). Respond directly to the journal prompt for each
assignment. You are required to:
Respond to the journal prompt highlighting something you have learnt from the subject’s
resources and your experiences.
Reflect upon and analyse issues presented in the prompt. You are encouraged to reflect on
the relevance of key concepts/ideas presented to your experience, prior knowledge,
workplace or region.
Effectively communicate & demonstrate learning by discussing key ideas/concepts from
resources (and referring to authors using APA referencing).
Articulate the significance of your learning (why it matters).
Identify how you can use your learning, especially in relation to personal, social and
professional contexts.COMR2010_Assignment 2_Journal Page 3 of 8
Reflective Journal Entry: Part A - due end of Module 2 (Week 4)
Prompt: ‘Feeling like a fish out of water’
The expression in English- “feeling like a fish out of water”- is used to describe experiences and
situations when we feel really uncomfortable, when we are out of our normal range of activities
or environment.
DiAngelo and Sensoy (2014) state:
a fish is born into water and so simply experiences the water as one with itself; a fish
has no way of knowing that it is actually separate from the water. And although the
fish is separate, it still cannot survive without water. In the same way that a fish cannot
live without water, we cannot make sense of the world without the meaning-making
system that our culture provides. Yet this system is hard to see because we have always
been “swimming” within it; we just take for granted that what we see is real, rather than
a perception of our reality.
This echoes the Chinese saying,
If you want to know about water, don’t ask the goldfish
Consider the above quotes in the context of intercultural learning and exploring cultural differences.
“Water” refers to the things that we usually take for granted about our reality. What have you become
more aware about as a result of your intercultural learning- in terms of your water- since starting this
subject?
Reflective Journal Entry: Part B - due end of Module 4 (Week 8)
Prompt: ‘Assumptions of others’
Watch “What kind of Asian are you?” at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWynJkN5HbQ. Discuss
whether you or someone you know has had a similar experience as portrayed in the film. Describe
your thoughts and reactions to the video itself, as well as your emotions relating to your own personal
experiences. Apply the theories and ideas you have learnt about in this subject so far to explain the
behaviour displayed by both individuals in the film. Explore the work that you have completed for this
subject to date to see if you can identify any assumptions of others that you may have written about.
Discuss your findings.
Reflective Journal Entry: Part C - due end of Module 5 (Week 10)
Prompt: ‘Practicing border crossing’
Your task is to consciously make a decision to interact with another person who you have not
communicated with before and who has a different background and life experiences from yourself.
Your choice should involve a level of discomfort; a degree of perceived difference is necessary.
However, please do ensure your own safety. Enter a discussion in a spirit of openness. Engage in a
conversation of meaning, beyond the basic scripts such as “How are you? Fine. It’s hot today”. Ask
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skills. After the interaction, reflect on the dialogue. Describe how easy or difficult it was for you to
comprehend another individual’s worldview, from their perspective (not yours!). While practicing
‘border crossing’ did you have a chance to understand otherness in its own terms or did you only ‘see’
or acknowledge difference without exploring otherness in more depth?
Please note: If your first attempt at border crossing is unsuccessful, you will need to try again!COMR2007_Assignment 2_Reflective_Journal Page 5 of 8
Learning Rubrics for each part A, B, C
Assessment
Attributes
Fail
(0-49%)
Pass
(50-64%)
Credit
(65-74%)
Distinction
(75-84%)
High Distinction
(85-100%)
Knowledge and
understanding of the
issues presented in
the prompt
20%
Limited understanding of required
concepts and knowledge
Key components of the assignment are
not addressed.
Knowledge or
understanding of the
issues presented in the
prompt.
Highlights learning
from the subject’s
resources and
experiences.
Resembles a recall or
summary of key ideas.
Often
conflates/confuses
assertion of personal
opinion with
information
substantiated by
evidence from the
research/course
materials.
Thorough knowledge
or understanding of
the issues presented in
the prompt.
Highlights learning
from the subject’s
resources and
experiences that
support personal
opinion and
information
substantiated by
evidence.
Demonstrates a
capacity to explain and
apply relevant
concepts through
reflection.
Highly developed
understanding of
the issues
presented in the
prompt.
Discriminates
between assertion
of personal
opinion of learning
and information
substantiated by
robust evidence
from the
research/course
materials and
extended reading.
Well
demonstrated
capacity to explain
and apply relevant
concepts through
reflection.
A sophisticated
understanding of the
issues presented in
the prompt.
Reflectively,
systematically and
critically discriminates
between assertion of
personal opinion and
information
substantiated by
robust evidence from
the research/course
materials and
extended reading.
Mastery of concepts
and application to
new
situations/further
learning.
Critical reasoning,
presentation and
defence of key
concept/ideas
Specific position (perspective or
argument) fails to take into account the
complexities of the issue(s) or scope of
the assignment.
Specific position
(perspective or
argument) begins to
take into account the
Specific position
(perspective or
argument) takes into
account the
Specific position
(perspective or
argument) is
expertly presented
Specific position
(perspective or
argument) is
presented expertly,COMR2007_Assignment 2_Reflective_Journal Page 6 of 8
presented to
experience, prior
knowledge,
workplace or region.
20%
Makes assertions that are not justified.
issue(s) or scope of the
assignment.
Justifies any
conclusions reached
with arguments not
merely assertion.
Articulates the
significance of learning.
complexities of the
issue(s) or scope of the
assignment. Others’
points of view are
acknowledged.
Justifies any
conclusions reached
with well-formed
arguments not merely
assertion.
and accurately
takes into account
the complexities of
the issue(s) and
scope of the
assignment.
Justifies any
conclusions
reached with welldeveloped
arguments that
relate specifically
to the significance
of learning.
authoritatively and
imaginatively,
accurately taking into
account the
complexities of the
issue(s) and scope of
the assignment.
Limits of position are
acknowledged.
Justifies any
conclusions reached
with sophisticated
arguments.
Analysis and
application with
synthesis of new
knowledge in relation
to personal, social
and professional
contexts.
20%
Limited synthesis and analysis.
Limited application/recommendations
based upon analysis.
Demonstrated analysis
and synthesis of new
knowledge with
application.
Identifies how learning
can be applied in
practical ways.
Shows the ability to
interpret relevant
information and
literature.
Well-developed
analysis and synthesis
with application of
recommendations
linked to analysis/
synthesis.
Clear and detailed
identification of how
learning can be applied
in different contexts.
Thoroughly
developed and
creative analysis
and synthesis with
application of
pretested models
and / or
independently
developed models
and justified
recommendations
linked to
analysis/synthesis
Highly sophisticated
and creative analysis,
synthesis of new with
existing knowledge.
Strong application by
way of pretested
models and / or
independently
developed models.
Recommendations
are clearly justified
based on the
analysis/synthesis.
Applying knowledge
to newCOMR2007_Assignment 2_Reflective_Journal Page 7 of 8
situations/other
cases.
Use of academic and
discipline
conventions and
sources of evidence
20%
Poorly written with errors in spelling,
grammar.
Demonstrates inconsistent use of good
quality, credible and relevant research
sources to support and develop ideas.
There are mistakes in using the APA
style.
Is written according to
academic genre (e.g.
with introduction,
conclusion or
summary) and has
accurate spelling,
grammar, sentence
and paragraph
construction.
Demonstrates
consistent use of
credible and relevant
research sources to
support and develop
ideas, but these are
not always explicit or
well developed.
There are no mistakes
in using the APA style.
Is well-written and
adheres to the
academic genre (e.g.
with introduction,
conclusion or
summary).
Demonstrates
consistent use of high
quality, credible and
relevant research
sources to support and
develop ideas.
There are no mistakes
in using the APA style.
Is very well-written
and adheres to the
academic genre.
Consistently
demonstrates
expert use of good
quality, credible
and relevant
research sources
to support and
develop
appropriate
arguments and
statements. Shows
evidence of
reading beyond
the key reading
There are no
mistakes in using
the APA style.
Expertly written and
adheres to the
academic genre.
Demonstrates expert
use of high-quality,
credible and relevant
research sources to
support and develop
arguments and
position statements.
Shows extensive
evidence of reading
beyond the key
reading
There are no mistakes
in using the APA
Style.
Effective
communication
Difficult to understand for audience, no
logical/clear structure, poor flow of
ideas, argument lacks supporting
evidence.
Information,
arguments and
evidence are presented
in a way that is not
Information,
arguments and
evidence are well
presented, mostly
Information,
arguments and
evidence are very
well presented,
Expertly presented;
the presentation is
logical, persuasive,
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20% No effort is made to keep audience
engaged, audience cannot follow the
line of reasoning.
Little use of presentation aids, or the
presentation aids and material used are
irrelevant.
always clear and
logical.
Attempts are made to
keep the audience
engaged, but not
always successful. Line
of reasoning is often
difficult to follow.
Presentation aids are
used more for effect
than relevance.
clear flow of ideas and
arguments.
The audience is mostly
engaged, line of
reasoning is easy to
follow.
Effective use of
presentation aids.
the presentation is
logical, clear and
well supported by
evidence.
Engages the
audience,
demonstrates
cultural sensitivity.
Carefully and well
prepared
presentations aids
are used.
by evidence,
demonstrating
learning by discussing
key ideas/concepts
from resources.
Engages and sustains
audience’s interest in
the topic,
demonstrates high
levels of cultural
sensitivity
Effective use of
diverse presentation
aids, including
graphics and multimedia.