A Thesis regarding mergers and acquisitions. I already wrote a things in my document. However it is not good as you can see the feedback of my supervisor. The latest comment my supervisor gave: Please find attached my comments. While there are still language mistakes this now reads much much better. Having said that it is detailed, but it is not comprehensive. You have mostly discussed one (although important) theoretical paper in the first part. You need to tell us if this model is successful if applied to data. You also need to tell us more about the cash/stock payments. There are plenty of papers that report fractions and values of deals. Does cash payment correlate with positive outcomes? Who pays with cash, etc. Cheers, Improve the thesis as mentioned by the supervisor. Also, finish chapter 3. Moreover my thesis supervisor is really strict using sources. Therefore, only use good source such as articles retrieved from: -Journal of Finance -Journal of Finance and Banking -Journal of Finance and Economics I have added some articles, which I have used in writing the thesis and which are good!